Magzine Mock Up - Audience Feedback

As a whole the audience feed back that I received for my magazine advert seemed to be widely positive. They loved the way in which the back ground linked to the fore ground of the image.They also loved the colour scheme and that it shows power and wealth ect however many people thought that gold would stand out more and show him to be powerful. For this reason i will be changing my colour scheme to the colours gold white and grey. Some concerns that were brought up included the way that the bottom part of the advert was laid out with many people saying that there was too much black in it. This will be addressed in my first draft.