Hi, My name is Yasmin Wilks and I am an A Level student studying Media Studies at Harris Sixth Form. This is my A2 Blog where I will record and update my coursework throughout the year. Our brief this year is to create a marketing package for an artist consisting of 3 products: A Music Video, A Digipak and A Magazine Advertisement This blog will document the research, planning, production and post-production journey. Enjoy!
Tuesday, 10 January 2017
Digi Pack Draft 2
This is the second draft of my Digi Pack it shows how I have taken on board the feedback from my first draft.
Particularly in the way the digital components bolster the main idea, Draft 2 seems better organized. Phrases like " do my MBA assignment for me" show genuine tension rather than marketing, and many students can identify with this strain. In this present edition, improving the tone and images could increase the pack's trustworthiness and clarity.
This one is a good draft that you have made. How much time you will require more to make a final draft?
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Particularly in the way the digital components bolster the main idea, Draft 2 seems better organized. Phrases like " do my MBA assignment for me" show genuine tension rather than marketing, and many students can identify with this strain. In this present edition, improving the tone and images could increase the pack's trustworthiness and clarity.
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